Shot List

Shot 1 - Tracking shot of feet walking
Shot 2 - Shot of belt close up
Shot 3 - Shot of knuckles clicking and ring on finger close up
Shot 4 - Shot through the locked fence low angle shot
Shot 5 - close up shot of guard/security's face turning around
Shot 6 - low angle shot of fence opening and Jim behind it
Shot 7 - shot of security guard screwing his face
Shot 8 - Camera moves back with jim whilst security at back staring
MIGHT DOES:
- Close ups of cigarettes being taken out, Jim opens it up he takes one out (3 inside with lighter)
- Close up of jim sticking it in his mouth, Lights it up and smoked
Shot 9 - close up of Jim taking out phone
Shot 10 - close up of jims face taking off his glasses, phone comes up to his ear
Shot 11 - Shot of phone Vibrating
Shot 12 - close up shot of jim getting annoyed
Shot 13 - Shot of phone, hand appears picks it up
Shot 14 - Tim looks at the phone confused close up of face, he answers
Shot 15 - Close up of jim talking
Shot 16 - Close up of Tim talking
Shot 17 - long shot of Jim waving in front of the road
Shot 18 Close up of Tim screwing
Shot 19 - Close up of Jim shouting, ends call
Shot 20 - Medium shot of security laughing
Shot 21 - Long shot Jim walks away whilst security laughs.. fades
Shot 22 - Shots of new scenery
Shot 23
Shot 24
Shot 25
Shot 26
Shot 27 - Jim enteres
Shot 28 - Extreme close up of watch
Shot 29 - High angle long shot of Jim looking around impatiently
Shot 30 - Tim enters scene smiling with medium shot/tracking walking towards jim
Shot 31 - Jim turns around with a fake smile Medium shot
Shot 32 - Tim still walking towards Jim opens his arms up as a greeting
Shot 33 - Jim then walks towards Tim, opens his arms medium shot
Shot 34 - Long shot of both characters walking to each other with arms out
Shot 35 - Close up of Jims face slowly showing how he is feeling (furious)
Shot 36 - Low angle shot behind Jim giving an uppercut
Shot 37 - Low angle shot behind Tim falling back to the ground with jim standing looking superior with a smirk
Shot 38 - Close up of tim wiping blood off of his lip
Shot 39 - Low angle/Medium shot of jim talking looking down on him, camera follows him whilst turning his back to Tim whilst camera zooms out showing jim talking and Tim on the floor, Tim gets up and runs to him
Shot 40 - Over shoulder shot of tim throwing a punch to Jim
Shot 41-60 - FIGTH SCENE dialog involved whilst fighting
Shot 61 - Long shot of tim and jim exhausted face to face huffing and puffing, they both quit and fall down against the wall together
Shot 62 - Close up of Jim takes out his cigarettes
Shot 63 - Medium shot of both characters talking and lighting cigarettes

LR

WWW- There is the potential for a very good essay and that you have already got something to our and there's plenty to work on too.

EBI-

- written English and basic errors you need to proof read. Laura croft? Women are begging? 

-The Internet isn't an intro first paragraph needs a lot of work

-not focus on the question

-topic sentences for each paragraph need to clearly link to the question

-only 15 footnotes need another 10/20 Need more from books and journals

-you could make much more of you 21st-century feminism blogs twitter

-bibliography needs more you must have films in there 

-you need to learn how to introduce quotes

 Aiming grade - B - 33 marks 

5 things: 

-more quotes search up online 

-check work before handing it in

- introduce quotes properly

-get more footnotes from journals and books to get a better grade 

-spell check before you hand it in so that no spelling errors can bring you down